Friday, 29 November 2013

persuasive techniques letter

Dear Head-teacher,
I am writing to you today to discuss the matter of shortening the school day.
I appreciate that changing the school hours would be a disposition, however this would dramatically improve the performance of the students, would mean that the students could work outside of school, and mean that the students would be less tired, leading to better results.
I am certain that changing the school hours from 8:30-3 to 10-2 would conclusively improve the mentality and performance of the students at Shenfield school. I am absolutely astounded by anyone who opposes my idea, as I myself cannot see any downfalls with it. Did you know that a school in Cumbria changed their sixth form school hours to 10-2 every day and their students achieved one of the highest a-level grades as a whole in the entire Nation? The stats speak for themselves. So I am begging you (if asking is even needed) to change the school hours for the hardworking labourous students at Shenfield and for you, your job becomes so much easier, as the results will be A's after A's after A's.
Yours faithfully, Charlie Mackinnon.

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